Rating: 85/100
As I felt that it has achieved what I wanted to achieve in the first place as it indeed gave a feeling of an advertisement - as if I was "advertising" myself. And the product found in the picture are normally what I like to do - taking photograph (i.e the UV filter), watching movie (i.e the film), listening to music (i.e ipod and CD) and playing board games (i.e the scribble pieces and otella pieces). Putting my own picture and name on it, give a strong feeling of my own identity and the viewers will know that this piece is about me. I also think that my composition is a also pretty details but still not very clutter and confusing.
XinYing's work struck me as the best among the class - simply for one reason: experimental. A lot of people experimenting with light and motion but she experiment with bubble and liquid (forgot what she use already). And I think Mr Reddy would prefer a more experimental artwork. So rated her work against mine.
